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Beach Day

Posted on November 22, 2010 at 1:03 PM

Cody   

The Best Day At Beach



I can feel the ocean breeze on my face as I  walk across the beach. I can smell of pine trees as well in my nose. I start running in to the water and splashing around and going for swims deep out and then I get out of the water. I start to shiver so I get my towel and wrap my self up in the nice, warm, soft towel. I'm lying on the ground looking at the clouds making shapes then I sit up. Now I can see the Salmon. I can hear them racing down the water. The sunset is coming, my mom is probably looking for me. I've got to go, bye.

 


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